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    dots Submission Name: Evolvedots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I would rather take the time than pace what is wasted with every anxious thought

    I would rather walk with my eyes fondly following the things that please and attract them and allow my heart to flutter with curiosity

    I do need to slow my heartbeat as it clings and holds so tightly onto the things that desolve it.

    Need to instead embrace every oppurtunity to thank the rain for growth in the atmosphere
    cleansing in my pores
    release of pressure
    when taking the chance to have faith

    Every breath is spiritual to me and has me hoping that the next thing that happens will make me double over with laughter
    pouring tears from eyes because I am so beside myself with pure and simple joy

    I desire that lighter finer smile
    And release the rest to the process of extermination






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      Hello Lori, hope you are doing well this day.
    | Posted on 2011-12-24 00:00:00 | by malcolmknight | [ Reply to This ]
      yes! this is exactly what i've been dwelling about since last night! it's time to be thankful for everything beautiful and given by God and the Universe, apart from seeing the flaws and complaining. live to laugh. without laughter, i believe, life would have no value. embrace and chase it like a child chasing their first butterfly. :) i could probably give better feedback, but you know me and my thoughts well enough, my dear. i always feel like i'm undermining your lovely work... i'd much rather share a few thoughts and let you go from there. it's a mind exercise between us. :)
    | Posted on 2011-11-16 00:00:00 | by bleeding-soul | [ Reply to This ]
      awww this was very moving for me. I love how your descriptive language and it flows so nicely! :-) kudo's i love this post!!!

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2011-11-03 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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