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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    So hate me for being a little rough around the edges,
    But that's the way I like it.
    I like the ragged look- the truth torn to pieces,
    And the lies see through.
    That's what I've been through-
    That's how I know you.
    I keep running and running,
    I'm wearing thin.
    The ones I know- they know too.
    I like to feel a challenge-
    I like to look the way I am.
    I like to feel the rush, so I keep running-
    I keep my borders singed and my dreams keep me floating away.
    There are holes in my soul and scars on my heart,
    But I wouldn't have it any other way.
    This is how I know to live, every day running away,
    Only living in the moment.
    I won't let life bring me down again-
    I'll find a way to what I want, oh how I want it more than ever.
    I'll do anything to reach my stars-
    I'll let the wind pass under my holes to lift me higher-
    So high I'm not coming down.
    I'm like a picture of abstract colors,
    With the black around the edges-
    The tears in the corners from being ripped down so many times,
    But I've never felt more alive than I do now.




    Submitted on 2011-11-02 17:56:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow uh I am sorry i don't have much feedback its very positive like with negative undertones but thats just mostly cause of the holes but your using those to go higher making it you I really like this poem alot I think I am adding this to my favs nice!
    ~Jess~
    | Posted on 2011-11-05 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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