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    dots Submission Name: Run, Run, Run from Love dots
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    Author: Joybell
    ASL Info:    22/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 101/94/56
    Words: 278
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsRun, Run, Run from Love dots
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    Run, Run, Run from Love.
    Don’t stop, Don’t Pause, Don’t Hesitate.
    You know what you know, this never works, and it’s all fake.
    Don’t wait until it’s too late.

    Don’t get vulnerable, don’t get weak.
    All this talk of kids or no kids, “he needs to be sensitive”, you need to compliment and “give sex on a steady basis”.
    So many “We can work it out” So many serious conversations about bills and futures everything moving forward so quickly, no room for any doubt.

    How did you let yourself get here? Dreaming months before the wedding of running away with a long ago ex, dreams that make you wet when you remember his pets.
    What are you thinking? What are you trying to do; you always knew marriage was never for you.
    This isn’t the “you”, you want to be, but even so, this is you, so unfree.


    Run, Run, Run from Love.

    Don’t look back; don’t let your pace slack.

    Sure you could grow soft and open, let another man in your life to control and demand, make you wish you could be anything but his “biggest fan”

    Don’t look surprised my dear, did you think that you could actually make it here with all your past?
    The truth will always come out at last.
    I think what will crush you the most is he was the closest of the close, he actually loves you, you know.

    Well chin up my dear, no need to fear, you know how to be alone, you are so very good at running.
    Why are you still standing here?






    Submitted on 2011-11-03 15:02:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I recently got out of a relationship that got too serious too fast, and then one day I woke up and didnt know what on earth I was doing there. This piece hits the spot to be honest. I enjoyed it very much.
    | Posted on 2011-11-05 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]
      I got married once a pone a time and when he left I was left screaming WHY! WHY did I trust that he could love me for me love me because he loved me, why did I grow weak, why would anyone catch me? WHY? my heart was broken although i got a beautiful daughter out of it and I don't regret her or him I just regret that I had put so much into it and he was the one that ran away to the arms of another love, the saddest part is that I asked him. I much enjoyed reading this made me think perhaps if I had ran away since this is what I had been avoiding my whole life! nice write I hope things work out for you
    ~Jess~
    | Posted on 2011-11-05 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      sounds like a girl who found the right man and is having a case of pre-marital jitters. idk, the quotes sound more like common cliché reasons as apposed to personal ones. more like anxiety is what i read in this piece.
    | Posted on 2011-11-03 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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