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    dots Submission Name: Ode To Samanthadots

    Author: eden1931
    ASL Info:    18, Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 0/2/10
    Words: 309
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsOde To Samanthadots

    You came to me in a dream
    The wind danced in the bright green blades of grass
    You were running away from me
    Giggling with a sound that would make angels envious
    You ran into the forest in your little blue dress
    You lost your favorite blue ribbon
    It snagged itself on a branch of the tree
    I grabbed it as I followed you deep
    Until we can to a small pool of wonder
    It glistened in the sun’s light
    You smiled at me
    “Thank you, sissy!”
    Were your words to me
    I didn’t understand why you called me that
    As you took the ribbon from my hand
    “Put it back in my hair for me,”
    And I found myself smiling as I wrapped it into your golden curls
    I had never felt just joy in my life as I did then
    You faded away

    And I found myself in a house with you
    “you look so pretty!”
    You said as you pointed to a picture above the fireplace
    I looked up seeing a picture of myself
    Long black hair ended with ringlets
    Wearing a callor
    An emerald in the center
    In a beautiful velvet green dress
    I didn’t know why I there was a picture of me
    I turned to ask
    You were no longer standing beside me
    Holding my hand to tightly
    You screamed for me
    And flames engulfed everything
    You screamed and cried for me
    I couldn’t find you before someone pulled me out
    I was on my knees crying fighting to get back in
    Even though I didn’t know you
    I jump awake and looked around
    You are standing in the corner of my bedroom
    “Hi, sissy!”
    You smile and wave
    Before disappearing again
    And I wept
    For it is my fault you burned
    Almost three hundred years ago

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