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    Author: Little Gal
    ASL Info:    20 female, Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 469/431/94
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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       Sometimes I wish I never met you .


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    You were my love,
    my all,
    and my world.

    You made me laugh,
    but you made me cry,
    and my took away my world.

    You are nothing but a memory,
    I wish it were a good one,
    yet its a mixed emotion I feel for you .

    The scars you left will never heal,
    the wounds still bleed.
    And there is nothing I can do.

    Leave me be,
    let me cherish -
    what good I can make of our love

    Never again,
    shall I fall for you.
    Let me be peaceful,
    Let me learn again how to love.




    Submitted on 2011-11-05 10:40:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love is not a bed of roses but it has lot of thorns which really prick and especially if you have fallen for the wrong person. True and immaculate love which is the union of souls happen to only few lucky people. I hope your wounds heal soon.
    | Posted on 2011-11-06 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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