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    dots Submission Name: jilliandots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 455
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       this is to jillian.. bestfriends since 5th grade. i guess things change.


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    dotsjilliandots
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    we've gone to far to turn around now
    who we are today, is some what of a mystery to us
    you took your path and i chose mine
    we both know we cant turn back...
    but like always its at the back of my mind
    just what would happen
    if i never said those words
    what would we of done if i had taken that plane home
    would we have mended our bridges
    and learned to live again
    or would fate still bring us down our paths..
    we always swore we would never let anything
    and i mean anything come between us
    but its been over a year now
    and we havent spoken to eachother
    i hear your doing good though
    and sometimes it kills me to hear about your adventures
    because we planned all those things years ago
    i guess were throwing those years away
    because were both to proud to admit we were wrong
    i know that i have gone to long without saying sorry
    and i know that to you it wouldnt make a difference anyways
    so i guess i can just say goodbye now
    because you'll never come down off your high horse..
    we both end up a little lack luster
    and without a bestfriend.




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      I know how this feels......it sad that for so long you can hold a person dear to you and things just change so quickly.......anyway NICE
    ~Jess~
    | Posted on 2011-11-06 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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