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    Author: girly101
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 292/310/149
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    The girl of light and dreams
    grasps a sword in her fragile hands
    Though she is of good she knows the darkness that lurks within
    and she fears.

    Years go by and the girl walks on
    her sword never leaving her side.
    The darkness has grown
    the good overthrown
    and she battles the sin from inside

    To aid her in combat
    comes a man strong and brave
    with demons all slain behind him

    Comfort at last
    She can release her grasp
    and the sword drops numbly to the ground

    Held fast in strong arms
    kept safe from all harms
    she doesn't fear anymore
    The darkness




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