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    dots Submission Name: wept for youdots

    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotswept for youdots

    she stood there
    and let the waves crash upon her feet
    she just kept looking out towards the sea
    replaying memories and weeping
    the tears they made no sound
    and the memories were tearing her apart
    she just wanted to feel normal again
    not like she had been ripped in two
    how was she to know that when she met you
    that you would become the biggest part of her world
    she was so proud when you signed up
    bragged that you were defending us
    and then almost died when your ship blew up
    the world grieved, the world forgot about the little girl on the coast
    she was looked over as we all mourned for the loss of our sons
    she blamed god for her loss
    and wished for the devil to swallow her up
    she stood there
    and let the waves crash over her head
    she closed her eyes and saw your face
    and for the first time in a while she smiled
    but soon she couldn't breathe
    and she realized that this was her mistake
    she wanted to live but it was to late
    the current had pulled her away from us
    the ocean swallowed her up
    and today we mourn for the sweet girl
    who wept with us, who wept for us
    who wept for you..

    Submitted on 2011-11-09 19:35:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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