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    dots Submission Name: Vision Belldots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsVision Belldots

    Say & BElIeVE
    ALL is WELL
    ALL is WELL

    Know IT in Heart
    ALL does Tell

    DivINe Sound
    Vision Bell ~*~

    Submitted on 2011-11-09 20:01:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There is an old saying in Scotland.......if one says something often enough, then eventually one will believe it, and understand the true meaning of what one is saying.

    Kind of fits well with this write of yours.

    | Posted on 2011-11-13 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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