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Vision Bell


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 23
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Short & Sweet Smiles 2 Share ;-)


Vision Bell



Say & BElIeVE
ALL is WELL
ALL is WELL

Know IT in Heart
ALL does Tell

DivINe Sound
Vision Bell ~*~




Submitted on 2011-11-09 20:01:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  There is an old saying in Scotland.......if one says something often enough, then eventually one will believe it, and understand the true meaning of what one is saying.

Kind of fits well with this write of yours.

Frank.
| Posted on 2011-11-13 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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