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Submission Name:
Vision Bell
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Author:
Epiphany
ASL Info:
42/F/Universe
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4.38 - 3342/2139/390
Words:
23
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
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Description:
Short & Sweet Smiles 2 Share ;-)
Vision Bell
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Say & BElIeVE
ALL is WELL
ALL is WELL
Know IT in Heart
ALL does Tell
DivINe Sound
Vision Bell ~*~
Submitted on 2011-11-09 20:01:36
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There is an old saying in Scotland.......if one says something often enough, then eventually one will believe it, and understand the true meaning of what one is saying.
Kind of fits well with this write of yours.
Frank.
| Posted on 2011-11-13 00:00:00 | by
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