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Vibrant Power Pink ~*~


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 33
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles 2 Share ;-) <3


Vibrant Power Pink ~*~



Vibrant Power Pink
Color ALL 2 ThINk

Expressive Sunset
Story Tells

ME I AM
Very Wells

Wells of Water
& of Wine
WithIN ALL
I AM Fine ~*~





Submitted on 2011-11-09 20:33:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very uplifting and expressive. Those wells of yours sure seem to be doing you a power of good !!!

Frank.
| Posted on 2011-11-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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