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    dots Submission Name: happy daysdots
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    Author: dragonheart99
    Elite Ratio:    0.71 - 2/2/3
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotshappy daysdots
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    today is my happy day
    I will sing and dance
    and play all day
    Everyone will be happy
    Hopefuly tommorows my happy day to.
    now i'm getting sleepy how 'bout you?




    Submitted on 2011-11-10 09:00:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just a Fun and Simple Peom!! I like it
    | Posted on 2011-11-10 00:00:00 | by Marybelle | [ Reply to This ]


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