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    Author: Little Gal
    ASL Info:    20 female, Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 469/431/94
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 452
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       Title suggestions ? I don't even know where this came from, I just doodled it out you know..


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    Of green fields and clovers I dream,
    For such sights I have rarely seen.
    Of walks with yiu as the sun will set,
    And conversations I surely never forget.
    Come to me in the springtime,
    Or even winter and fall.
    All summer I called you mine -
    Were you even there at all ?




    Submitted on 2011-11-10 18:20:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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