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    dots Submission Name: The only onedots

    Author: xxalpal4everzxx
    ASL Info:    13/F/Pennsylvania
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 10/26/19
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe only onedots

    Baby youíre the only one I want,
    My heart is yours to hunt,
    Your bright smile makes my day,
    You make the clouds go far away,
    The way I canít stop wanting you,
    I hope that you want me too,
    I just need you here with me,
    I know with your heart there is no fee,
    The stars are jealous of your eyes,
    Because with them you show no lies,
    They are brighter and deeper than the stars above,
    Oh my darling for you I will always love.

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