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1. In its entirety, the universe circles about with snapping jaws. Waiting to be eaten, I lie still at night, stiff as the carapace of love. The only sound the sucking of eyelids. The only movement my throat, its murmuration of starlings. 2. The mountains waded knee-deep in wild grain. I moved deep into them, they asked do you hate them no only the heavy etch of fingerprints do you aspire to oceans no only their uncertain bathometer do you seek succor from fear no only a return to myopia. Silent, gleaming slate blue in the afternoon sun, they opened their maw and took me in. |
I like to use my own signature; the 'do you' & 'no only' parts make me want to go right out and copy that. | Posted on 2012-02-18 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ] | number 2. okay---interesting reverse beat to the rhythm... | number 1 blew me away..perfect wording...i heard, saw and felt this piece. i lie still at night waiting...stiff....waiting for the universe to do its thing...and to be carried away...at its mercy..i am but waiting...waiting... there is a feeling of impending movement...but in what direction? like the questions this leaves...the hesitation. like a breath waiting to be exhaled... jacob | Posted on 2011-11-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ] | |