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    dots Submission Name: chilldots
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    Author: Outlaw
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 510/413/195
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       chill·ing
         [chil-ing]
    adjective
    causing or likely to cause a chill: the chilling effect of the high unemployment rate.

    noun
    1.
    coldness, especially a moderate but uncomfortably penetrating coldness: the chill of evening.
    3.
    a feeling of sudden fear, anxiety, or alarm.
    5.
    a depressing influence or sensation: His presence cast a chill over everyone.

    adjective
    11.
    depressing or discouraging: chill prospects.
    12.
    Slang . cool ( def. 14 ) .

    Verb phrase
    23.
    chill out, Slang . to calm down; relax. Also, chill .


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    dotschilldots
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    I marvel at the reconsideration

    Of past iterations forgone due to lack of

    substantiation.

    At the you inside of every bridled motion of my self

    reminiscent of itself.

    Let me worry, let me toil, simply so that I can know

    In you

    The moment of no worry, of no toil.

    Let me worship every hour that we can spoil

    Forgotten

    Or rather, unnoticed.


    Let me pray at the feet of this moment

    So that it may be said that I

    Appreciated every little piece of it

    And that I may speak these words

    Only so that you may hear them once,

    And again, and yet some more.





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      Let me worship every hour that we can spoil

    Let me pray at the feet of this moment

    Wonderful stuff!

    I like the definitions of "chill" above it, also. It really helps to frame the piece.

    Did you take the photo?

    I really enjoyed this.

    Jane
    | Posted on 2011-12-19 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice. Oh for my memories to serve as well as my opinions. At some point we are left with feelings where memories used to be. Nice prayer there.
    | Posted on 2011-11-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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