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    dots Submission Name: Existencedots

    Author: Dolor
    ASL Info:    21/m
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 129/158/79
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    When stitching up thoughts
    of suicide
    I never imagined I'd feel
    more alive

    Submitted on 2011-11-17 12:55:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      When taking the helplessness out of death and controlling it, you're very empowered. Cute presentation.
    | Posted on 2011-11-20 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      You know what, this really hit me and I liked it. I love paradox, no, I love paradox that makes sense. When one thinks about suicide seriously--which I never have--I imagine people are too caught up in psychological depression and biological numbness to really think about anything. But if one can think while these ideas come to mind, you may start to remember what it is that you have to live for, even if it is just this; your vivid imagination creating dramatic scenes of suicide.

    Hope you are all right there, by the way.
    | Posted on 2011-11-20 00:00:00 | by coloredstone | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmmm, the best kind of suicide is suicide bombing. not only do you liberate yourself, but others as well.
    | Posted on 2011-11-20 00:00:00 | by Pietro | [ Reply to This ]
      Suicidal thoughts
    are for those who fall apart.
    "Stitching" things up...
    pulling yourself back together.

    Thank you for making this known:
    It CAN be done!

    Nice, simple, clean write.
    Much appreciated.
    | Posted on 2011-11-19 00:00:00 | by KimmyMim | [ Reply to This ]
      The thoughts are like the climbing of a mountain: Each one brings you closer to the top.

    I often feel that way. I feel as if the more I think about death, the more alive I become.

    Oh, Descartes, you were right.
    | Posted on 2011-11-19 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      and every day i think of a reason not to...


    | Posted on 2011-11-17 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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