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love found


Author: love gone wrong
ASL Info:    27/m/colorado
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Words: 13
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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just a little something to remind us all that love will come again....even if its just in watching a beautiful sunrise....a new beginning


love found



Blues, Pinks, Oranges and Yellows
Blur my vision
The awakening, the amazing....
Sunrise




Submitted on 2004-02-15 12:31:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  mmmm.... I love sunrise... not quite enough to watch it on a routine basis, but still... Very well done. The metaphor is contained in the title... nice twist... g'night...*nodding over keyboard* <><
| Posted on 2004-02-20 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
  I have always loved the metaphor of new love as a new dawn/awakening , and here you just say it all so succinctly ..like a fresh new watercolor. Good One, Silver
| Posted on 2004-02-16 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very pretty. I like how it sounds like you are describing a painting. Very successfully minimalistic.
| Posted on 2004-02-15 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice short piece made more univesral by your title. I like that you used the title to create a metaphor not truly suggested in the poem itself.
jaycee
| Posted on 2004-02-15 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like this one . Short and sweet. I like reading cheery love poems. I like your choice of hues--they do seem to represent a sunrise as well as a new beginning. Dawn . The best part of day.
| Posted on 2004-02-15 00:00:00 | by PastelSky | [ Reply to This ]
  Now there you go. Passion of an all new shade. Great to see you are doing well. Beautiful write. Short and sweet yet full of life. Much better. Thanks for everything.
| Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by lostandfound | [ Reply to This ]


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