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    dots Submission Name: Daggers In The Darknessdots
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    Author: Ron Cole
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 2383/1715/240
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I am recovering from a mild stroke, and this poem represents both an attempt to test my mechanical skills and also my executive writing skills.


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    dotsDaggers In The Darknessdots
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    Oh dagger in the darkness
    piercing from the night's dark sky
    leaving many widows mourning
    while fatherless children cry.

    Oh thieves that stalk the night
    leave my restless soul alone
    leave me to my own devises
    my own sins to atone.

    For I have work to do
    gracious gifts yet to bestow
    so thieves that stalk the darkness
    pack your dreary things and go.

    Ron Cole
    November 2011




    Submitted on 2011-11-19 11:51:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your gift for writing shines through as ever, Ron.

    We're blessed to have you here, sharing with us.

    My hopes and prayers for a continued recovery!

    | Posted on 2011-12-10 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      Life throws daggers at us all the time, which make us stronger then ever. So you will recover from this . Bye the way, very nice write...Wishing you a speady recovery.. Desi
    | Posted on 2011-11-26 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
      hey Ron great writings even more profound is the situations that inspires your creativity as for the mild stroke it will go away cause its a drop of water and a drop of water can not make an elephant like you wet.........good work
    | Posted on 2011-11-21 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]
      Poignant write from you Ron, and very well crafted indeed.

    I wish you a full and speedy recovery Ron.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-11-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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