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    dots Submission Name: Regaliadots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 527
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    dotsRegaliadots
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    Atoms slow to mist and colors run free,
    a wave of folded heresy inverts.
    I am the brush, the things between,
    a vicar of truth static in thirst.

    Rain and I, mother and child
    in search for a time to collide and
    smash together as destruction,
    as rebirth, pinned to wings of flies.

    Chasing ash, running still,
    this is dust and I am fine
    with pain grown from knowing
    and clocks leaking time...

    Readied for retributions
    yet a hair's-width from reach,
    I am the color of starvation
    leaving a dream's cheeks.

    Svw




    Submitted on 2011-11-20 12:27:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      from atoms to civilization to atoms...from dust we are born and back to dust we return...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-11-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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