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    dots Submission Name: Soldier dots
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    Author: Jawsh00
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 10/11/7
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 515
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    Description:
       Song i wrote about the men and women of the the military.


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    dotsSoldier dots
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    Marching is hardest
    When your alone
    fighting for freedom
    wanting to go home
    a war not over
    a soldier forever?
    dying for honor
    dying together

    Lay me back down
    As i fall a sleep
    Lead me to heaven
    Keep me safe

    Walking through shit
    Just to get to hell
    brothers in arms
    stories to tell
    scars buried deep
    bleed for the fact
    whispers tell you
    don't turn back

    Lay me back down
    As i fall a sleep
    Lead me to heaven
    Keep me safe




    Submitted on 2011-11-21 19:59:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Do too More I Really Enjoy Reading your Work
    Your so Talented God Bless

    | Posted on 2012-01-14 00:00:00 | by Marybelle | [ Reply to This ]
      i put this song on my favorites list. i dont understand how no one has commented on this yet. You are a very talented writer and i think i am going to keep my eye on you....Stalk lol please keep writing i would love to see more for you!!!!!

    ~Ms.understood
    | Posted on 2012-01-13 00:00:00 | by MsUnderstood | [ Reply to This ]


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