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    Author: AbsolutelyLost
    ASL Info:    27/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 54/41/33
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Speed writing test - 2 minute poetry :)


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    I am moving to a new place,
    midst new people with an older face.
    Just hope that it will not be the same old story,
    of me running after lustrous glory.
    And yet I hope that time does not fly by,
    and I get the warmth of those whom I am saying goodbye.




    Submitted on 2011-11-22 10:16:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy day!

    Short, sweet and to the point!

    Great exercise!

    Smiles to share :-)
    :)
    | Posted on 2011-11-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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