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    dots Submission Name: Without Youdots
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    Author: Majesticdreamer
    ASL Info:    26/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 2/4/4
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
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    dotsWithout Youdots
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    As each day slithers along
    My soul slowly dies
    My heart slowly stops beating
    These are my days without you.

    As the days go by
    The darker I turn
    From bubbly and bright
    to deep and dark
    These are my days without you.

    As these months have passed
    And I have missed you so
    I count down the days of your return
    I count down to the end of my dispair
    These are my days without you.

    You and I are today's
    Romeo and Juliet
    Edward and Bella
    And even Bonnie and Clyde
    Brought into reality
    For, without you I shall surely die.

    These are my days, weeks,
    Hours, months, and every thought

    Without You.




    Submitted on 2011-11-22 20:59:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a very Good write (=
    | Posted on 2011-12-03 00:00:00 | by Marybelle | [ Reply to This ]
      Absence sure does make the heart grow fonder.....you have clearly shown this, in this very good write.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-12-02 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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