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    dots Submission Name: half eaten sanitydots
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    Author: aftertheflesh
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 76/113/48
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotshalf eaten sanitydots
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    fondle your depression
    the end is in sight
    coddle your obseeive tendencies
    explode the hour is upon us
    watching as the blood fills the streets
    dancing through the fires
    and sifting through the changing ashes
    give a smile as your killed
    let them see the happiest of faces
    when your sacrificed
    make them think that you got the last laugh
    and your coming for them soon
    dance dance dance in the moonlight
    as the fires blaze all around you
    and when you gave
    this simple plague inside your eyes
    take my hand here's the plan
    tonight we die




    Submitted on 2004-07-31 12:52:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a good, but a bit scarey, and depressing, but I would like to more of this good crud ^-^, hehehe...

    "And when the Daughter of October Dies, we will take over"

    DSOTF
    | Posted on 2004-08-01 00:00:00 | by Siren Mengana | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey this is all cool. There are alot of spelling and grammar errors, but its all good, since it makes sense by context. I especially liked that line about fondling your depression - i've never heard anything like that and its hot! keep up the good work man.
    shard
    | Posted on 2004-07-31 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      love in pain together in love and dying the same holding the edge waiting for sin hoplessly beging to begin again just a thought
    | Posted on 2004-07-31 00:00:00 | by stickman | [ Reply to This ]



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