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    dots Submission Name: Manifestdots
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    Author: EW61
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 131/71/51
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Inspired by Tarot Card #1 from the Major Arcana: The Magician prepares us to change, to manifest our destiny and become part of the big picture. It reminds us that our magic is drawn from the Divine and that we must work in balance with nature. PEACE.


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    dotsManifestdots
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    Get ready
    You're here
    Queen Manifest
    Awaits

    Take charge
    Don't fear
    It's destiny
    Create!

    Make a wish
    The wish- a plan
    Set change afoot
    Then take a stand

    Your Magic
    Born in the Divine
    Entwined with Nature
    Thus, Arise!

    Universe unite
    Each breath
    Wondrous Spirit
    Heaven blessed

    Balanced with a
    Sacred kiss
    Embrace the Light
    In search of Bliss




    Submitted on 2011-11-24 16:38:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think life is based on chance and luck quite heavily...but i also think that we make our own luck...

    the right choices will come back to haunt us, but in a good way...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-11-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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