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Submission Name: Blank dots

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Author:	EshyFishy
ASL Info:	17/Dudette/Australia, bro
Elite Ratio:	7.41 - 113/99/43
Words:	99

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Being a Teen
Total Views:	122
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	708

Description:
idk

spontaneous crap I write in the space of 30 seconds.
goshdarn.
I haven't written in /months/.

Blank

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This whole page is a canvas
Blank
Blank
Blank
Just blank
I want to spill all my thoughts
My words
Everything, all my being
I want to put it all up
But how?
How do I untangle
The strings of letters
Hooked onto each other.
It's a disgusting process,
like pulling out strands of dead
hair from the plughole,
and you throw them out;
Out go the letters
into the world,
splatter on the canvas
leave a greasy mark
leave any mark
But I can't.

The whole page is a canvas
Blank
Blank
Blank

Still blank.

Submitted on 2011-11-25 05:44:57 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
And yet, there it is! This goes so well into the "being a teenager" in the aspect of self-discovery and also fits for all ages.
| Posted on 2011-11-25 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
writing about writer's block always seems a really good way to get past it...
| Posted on 2011-11-25 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.