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    dots Submission Name: Blankdots

    Author: EshyFishy
    Elite Ratio:    7.15 - 116/109/46
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Being a Teen
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    spontaneous crap I write in the space of 30 seconds.
    I haven't written in /months/.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    This whole page is a canvas
    Just blank
    I want to spill all my thoughts
    My words
    Everything, all my being
    I want to put it all up
    But how?
    How do I untangle
    The strings of letters
    Hooked onto each other.
    It's a disgusting process,
    like pulling out strands of dead
    hair from the plughole,
    and you throw them out;
    Out go the letters
    into the world,
    splatter on the canvas
    leave a greasy mark
    leave any mark
    But I can't.

    The whole page is a canvas

    Still blank.

    Submitted on 2011-11-25 05:44:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      And yet, there it is! This goes so well into the "being a teenager" in the aspect of self-discovery and also fits for all ages.
    | Posted on 2011-11-25 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      writing about writer's block always seems a really good way to get past it...
    | Posted on 2011-11-25 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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