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    dots Submission Name: Adrift ..edit 2dots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 328
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 396



    Description:
       doesn't make sense, still working on it.


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    dotsAdrift ..edit 2dots
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    Eternally lost.
    The winds are strong,
    amongst the skies, never ending.

    How can his world be shaped,
    when all his words evaporate?

    Indiscernible as to his lies or truths,
    the elusive remedy is desired,
    but there is nothing to alleviate his hold.

    No words to his driving force,
    that is creeping ever so closely.




    Submitted on 2011-11-25 17:54:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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