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    dots Submission Name: The Universedots
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    Author: EW61
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 131/71/51
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Inspired by The Tarot Card XXI: The Universe


    Though I still have three more poems to write for the Tarot's Major Arcana (The Lovers, Temperance and The Sun), this piece, The Universe is written to tie all of the related poems together. I have taken the titles and sentiments of the other poems from the group as a way to do this while also attempting to honor the theme of the Universe card. Specifically, the Universe (Card XXI) asks us to appreciate how our sense of timing may differ from the timing of the Universe
    itself...yet it reminds us that there are also times when we may see our destiny clearly and times when we connect deeply with others. These are moments to cherish as they become a source of internal strength.



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    dots The Universedots
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    Mother Wit's the Universe
    with Sun, and Moon and Stars
    The Emperor guides
    With High Priestess
    To show us where we are

    They turn the Wheel
    It shifts and falls
    We ride the wave
    'till Karma calls

    Ask the Heavens
    Raise the Fool
    Blind faith
    Resurgence
    Sees us through

    Cycling
    Circles
    Choose a Chair
    The lessons challenge
    Those who dare


    Mother Peace
    Knits heaven to earth
    Renews our will
    To soulfully search

    Explore the options
    make a wish,
    choose a path
    make time
    replenish

    In time
    clear view
    will manifest
    in cherished moments
    Heaven sent


    EW61
    November 24, 2011










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      This is a fairly good piece. I enjoy the flow and the general ambience you give.


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