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    dots Submission Name: Just a lil physco dots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    dotsJust a lil physco dots
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    cold days and tundras nights
    welcome to the state of Minnesota
    where the winters are torturous
    trapt stars shine bright
    and the drugs are notorious
    come step in my world, dinosaur ferocious
    beastly personality how can anyone attempt to control me
    tranquilizer mescalin straight to the head
    tell me i didn't loose conciseness again
    blood shed, unidentifiable body still tied up to the bed
    hide your fathers and sons daughters and moms but please leave the 18 year old pretty little preppy girls and let me have some fun, bust a nut using my twisted imagination,satisfaction,vacation, hostile home grown

    lately every one been bothering me and i don't see why
    walking around head full of loose screws
    sounding like pocket change who's hogged tied and crying in the basement, Horrifying chaos shackled somethings, no going back and no i don't mind committing homicide
    don't you know I'm a little bit psycho
    blasphemous Illuminati society will take your life before you take mine
    I'm a math magician
    you got a problem
    i have the solution
    you and me
    that's too many you see
    step up and lets see your reality
    someone better deliver the news to you
    sadly before u speak there nothing can be said
    dick in your throat
    go ahead i will wait choke
    sing a lullaby lights out
    tranquilizer mescalin straight to the head
    don't let me loose conciseness again.




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