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    dots Submission Name: X + O = $$$dots

    Author: Runes
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 790/815/281
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsX + O = $$$dots

    Tight skirt concert, pretty little candy box
    cream-filled dream thrill hustling by the tick-tock.
    Peek show no-no's,
    just call me Saint Anything.
    Pocket pennies buy my thoughts;
    the rest will cost you bling.

    Submitted on 2011-11-26 23:22:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like expensive candy especially if
    It comes in pretty wrappers
    | Posted on 2014-04-19 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. It's short and yet it's still to the point. You gave us a good description of whats going on. Really good imagery you gave us, but you also left some up to the imagination. Good work. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2011-12-20 00:00:00 | by stormybluerose | [ Reply to This ]
      JENNY, oh oh Jenny, Jen jem Jenny jem jew i've gotta another rhyme scheme for you Jen Jemmy Jen jemminy Jen Jem Jaroo this is what happens when pinks purple hued

    justin beiber grows pubic hair! NExt in my imagination!!!!!!

    yeah it's the new age algebra
    yeah mathmatician MADNESS
    yeah i got hand unclaspin bra's
    like did you hear what this kid spits?

    sing song day dream schemin up the head lines
    make shift movements movin to the groove ties
    tick-tacks and this that lookin for the fab-ricks
    gay as yall might say you'll still suck my
    dick tracy macys maccin up the momumental
    flip fried framing you'll see how this gets consequential
    cuz heart less fart tricks don't find it meaningful
    but i've been mining diamonds out of empty skulls

    yeah it's the new age algebra
    yeah mathmetician MADNESS
    yeah i gotcha hand unclaspin bra's
    in the maw of the new age sadness

    like one two three then four
    but i don't want to count no more
    wanna take these thoughts on a rap rock tour
    till the sea of my dreams is the thing on sure
    with percision i been hittin what u tinkin
    while you thinnin straight north
    but i'll be bend and pretendin while you stinkin
    and bleedin like a hor moanin pre teemed
    sippin on some tea seams lookin for the new scene to live out all the old dreams

    yeah it's the new age algebra
    yeah mathmatician MADNESS
    yeah i got hand unclaspin bra's
    like did you hear what this kid spits?
    (oh my Gawd i think he gonna hit it)

    yeah that's right i cum in tight and leave em loose like what you do sew by the time i'm through you all be trued wit halved heart hues bout the same old blues bout a different crew too talk to u bout what stress can do when the drama stems from trauma got grown ass men cryin bout their mama's and whole damned world still lookin or osama and the retards think we blame the country on obama but the devil ate the devil it's the post traumatic stress so save your symapthy let little nicky at them breasts cuz you'll cum right to the point and then scream out HE's the best cuz the new world oder keeps on cummin up with rests

    la da da
    la da da
    there it is the truthy truth
    la da da
    la da da
    so watcha gonna do
    | Posted on 2011-11-27 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2011-11-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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