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    dots Submission Name: note to self #2dots
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    Author: isabella
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    dotsnote to self #2dots
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    you've been here before.
    you've been here before and
    don't do it.

    listen to that down-
    low-every-calling-fiber
    of your natural being.






    run!





    Submitted on 2011-11-28 19:02:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Fight or flight. Applies to confrontation and relationships. Hopefully you made the right decision
    | Posted on 2014-07-09 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      Only the possibility of bad love could give rise to such panic!
    | Posted on 2012-11-20 00:00:00 | by Vancrown | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes I like this very much, it was a well structured piece, timeless, relatable, just all around good and interesting.


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    | Posted on 2011-12-15 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Timeless wisdom. The old school said "flee!". I too like the separation, thoughtful pause thing you did.
    | Posted on 2011-12-03 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      okay i'm back...very surprised there are not more responses to this.

    one thing that strikes me each time i come back to this...

    how far "run" is separated from the rest of the piece...like indicating.."get as far away from that relationship as fast as you can"

    create the safe distance.
    | Posted on 2011-11-30 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      did you write this about me?

    sounds like it...cause i have heard that voice before, several times....and i never listen...just plunge.

    love the last stanza's wording...
    | Posted on 2011-11-28 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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