You said it wouldn't work out
And I left with nothing gained.
She walked right back in your life,
as if nothing had ever changed.
Now you're sitting here crying
And you're sitting here alone
You're letting the tears keep falling
Because now she's gone.
First tears, no one notice
Its for good bye.
But your tears, falling harder
It makes me cry
And I know it should show me that something's wrong.
My tears can fall
But your tears can
cause my heart to shatter
And your tears will keep falling, because she's gone.
I just wanted to say that I focus on the feelings of your work a lot more than on your writing style. Its a deep sense of selflessness and sorrow that I can relate to. A common feeling to want someone so much and that person wanting someone else. Unfortunately we don't realize that we are worth so much more until its too late. Im sure there is someone that wants you just as much...
Good write and hope to read more vivid description on your next piece :)