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    Author: EW61
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 131/71/51
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Is there a way, or
    A word to describe the
    Mind-numbing fog storm
    Wrecking- havoc inside?

    Half-hearted, I wander
    Through nowhere, no way
    Unable to launder the
    Heartache
    Today

    Spinning, whirl-winding
    Unyielding- ly frayed
    I flounder and falter
    My flaws on display

    Flash-dancing remnants
    Surreal unrestrained
    Collide with my reason
    Clutter cluster my brain

    Mechanical voices
    Surf past me unchecked
    Ascending crescendos
    Collide-
    Disconnect

    Then silence so heavily
    Peels away time
    While slow motion memories
    Unravel unrhymed

    I watch through the window
    I see someone flee
    She looks like a fragment
    Resembling me

    She plows through the rubble
    Unaware of herself
    She plows through the fog
    Never minding she’s lost

    She's Unaffected by details
    Exhaustion
    Torn seams

    I wish I could hold her
    And keep her with me


















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