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    dots Submission Name: R.I.P. ELasticdots
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    Author: skinnydrew
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 5/8/11
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsR.I.P. ELasticdots
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    I stretch, i bend, i flex my mind
    I'll twister fuck your brain
    and mind fuck you all the time
    i surpass the thinkable never to be plain
    i bend the truth for my sake
    but i will never tell a lie
    your confusion is what i make
    i am as clever as a spy
    but now i stretched to far
    I've fucked my brain this time
    come enjoy and see the scar
    it truly is sublime
    for ELastic can only stretch so long
    until its limits are reached
    for my stretchy days are gone
    my own mind has been breached
    i have been kicked even while i'm down
    and it hurts worse than death
    so i now put down my crown
    as i take a final breath
    i hope you see what you've done
    because now i have snapped
    no more ELastic fun
    that rubber band has cracked
    as i hold back the tears that remain
    to find something more splendiforous
    i hide from all to take a new name
    and so i will remain Enonymous




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