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    dots Submission Name: Dear Ambition..dots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
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       Short and simple tribute to success..


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    dotsDear Ambition..dots
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    To you I owe all my present and future success
    in my hard times you over came my stress
    Helped me through life's no's and told me yes
    Lord knows my faith is strong and I'm very bless
    When I'm confused and everything seems to be a mess
    I focuse very hard about every move like it was chess
    This place is a battle field and you are my vest
    Ambition to you I owe everything so in you I invest..





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