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    dots Submission Name: Lift Medots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Prose/
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    dotsLift Medots
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    Lift me away from the darkness that enraptures me.

    Feel the cascading crystals befall me,

    and let them break free,

    serving its unending plea.




    Submitted on 2011-12-05 03:48:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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