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    dots Submission Name: Clumsy Lovedots

    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Comedy
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       A few some what funny lines about love..

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    dotsClumsy Lovedots

    Oh how I can't understand my unusual behavior..
    Falling for you, almost broke my legs doing so..
    Dropping all my other girls, im still hiding from some..
    Messing up my room looking for the right outfit to wear...
    Forgetting about my friends for a few weeks now..
    What can i say? I got that clumsy love for you girl...... :)

    Submitted on 2011-12-08 19:00:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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