Clumsy Love

Author: YoungKaizen ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4 /6 /19 Words: 62

Class/Type: Cheesy Joke /Comedy Total Views: 2108 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 372

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Clumsy Love

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Oh how I can't understand my unusual behavior.. Falling for you, almost broke my legs doing so.. Dropping all my other girls, im still hiding from some.. Messing up my room looking for the right outfit to wear... Forgetting about my friends for a few weeks now.. What can i say? I got that clumsy love for you girl...... :)

Submitted on 2011-12-08 19:00:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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