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    dots Submission Name: Clumsy Lovedots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Comedy
    Total Views: 1082
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 372



    Description:
       A few some what funny lines about love..


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    dotsClumsy Lovedots
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    Oh how I can't understand my unusual behavior..
    Falling for you, almost broke my legs doing so..
    Dropping all my other girls, im still hiding from some..
    Messing up my room looking for the right outfit to wear...
    Forgetting about my friends for a few weeks now..
    What can i say? I got that clumsy love for you girl...... :)




    Submitted on 2011-12-08 19:00:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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