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    dots Submission Name: I am, I ain't dots

    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
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    dotsI am, I ain't dots

    The child says, "I ain't gonna do it!"
    "Speak properly" the parent says, "I am not going to do it."
    The child says, "You ain't doing it neither?"
    "No", the parent says, "You are not doing it either."
    "That's right", the child says, "I ain't gonna do it."
    The parent says, "You must say, "I am not going to do it.""
    The child says, "You ain't gonna do it."
    "No, the parent says, "I am not going to do it and you are not going to do it."
    "I understand," the child says, "I ain't gonna do it and you ain't gonna do it neither."
    The parent says, "You must not say "ain't", or use neither for either, and you are doing it."
    "I didn't say you are doing it," the child says. "I said, 'You ain't doing it.'"
    "I am not doing it, you are doing it," the parent says.
    "It's all so easy. Why are you mixed up?" the child asks.

    Submitted on 2011-12-09 06:40:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy day!

    This was a light-hearted piece that speaks to what language means to each and it made me smile!

    Thanks! Smiles to Share :-)
    | Posted on 2013-02-06 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2011-12-13 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol, I really enjoyed this. It was playful and at ease and a really great break from the normal subject on this site, and well everywhere.

    Lead by example!

    I don't know I really liked this piece, not a lot to try and break down or critisize.

    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-12-10 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

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