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    dots Submission Name: You're Nothing Newdots
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    Author: Jazzy
    ASL Info:    20/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 90/220/226
    Words: 284
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 358
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    Bytes: 1598



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    dotsYou're Nothing Newdots
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    I'm pretty sure this thing isnt loaded
    And maybe it's just wishful thinking but every once
    In a while I hope that somebody out there is
    Thinking about me.
    I'm not wondering if its you, because
    I know you never would.
    My only regret is that I never let you
    Hold me back.

    I would sway to the beat
    And my arms would pump in a rhythm
    That I know you couldn't feel
    And dance like you never would.
    I let the lights swim over me and I laughed
    Knowing that this would only make you
    Feel uncomfortable and confused.
    The pounding in my chest wasn't just the music
    But the way I pressed myself against these
    Strangers and let myself feel the rush of
    Being myself again.

    The only thing I felt for you was
    Sorry that you cared but I knew
    That you were the kind of person that I was
    Supposed to fall in love with
    But no part of me ever would.

    You cant love me and you
    Never cared to know me and you only
    Wanted me around for reasons that I
    Don't understand either.

    But I love the things you taught me
    Like how if I need something I just need
    To run to those places and dance until
    I find it. I found the music that makes me
    Want to dance and I found the words that
    Make me want to sing and thank God they
    Had nothing to do with you because that
    Would be awkward, wouldnt it?




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