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    dots Submission Name: It is...dots
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    Author: Sir Fusting
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 5/33/25
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsIt is...dots
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    riddled with time's embrace
    tickled with the sweet taste
    of age
    and knowing the chase
    testing the boundaries more
    when the boundaries are set
    awfully clear on the floor

    the sweet scent
    of intent
    to do right
    and stay bright
    to capture each moment
    and hold it
    with care
    it's made to
    share

    it's not 'til too late
    that we realize fate
    had a different course
    with no remorse
    only knowing
    that the past is set in stone
    and the future has yet to be drawn
    though in the end
    I've known this all along




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