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    dots Submission Name: Heredots

    Author: EW61
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 131/71/51
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       For Tara:
    After a very hard day

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    Whichever way
    The wind blows
    However long
    We don't know
    I'm with you
    On this journey
    Looking for the way

    The way will
    Give you freedom
    To grab your dreams
    And be them
    No matter how
    No matter when
    I know you
    Will prevail
    And then...

    With Phoenix
    You'll soar past pain
    Past breathless
    Sleepless nights...
    You'll take the
    Lessons of these days
    With them,
    Reclaim your life

    Though I am but
    A Witness
    And we may disagree
    I know your heart, my daughter
    How can I not believe?

    I've watched you brave
    The hardship
    I've watched you take
    Your stand
    I've listened on the sidelines
    I've acted when I can

    Even as we struggle
    Through seamless, endless nights
    We'll see this through together
    Somehow we'll set it right

    We're human
    Bound to do our best
    To find our way to brave...

    Though short term rounds
    They fade

    The truth
    Is in the bond
    We've made

    One day
    When you've recovered
    You'll share this history
    And I'll still be here cheering
    As you sing!

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      I like this it sweet and loving
    it shows great emotion
    | Posted on 2011-12-26 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]

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