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    dots Submission Name: Petty Theftdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsPetty Theftdots
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    You donít still love me do you
    You never loved me from the start
    You were just playing with my head
    And playing with my heart
    I say there's nothing in this lifetime
    What I meant, there's nothing left
    It seems that murdering my soul
    Is just a step past petty theft





    Submitted on 2011-12-13 15:29:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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