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    dots Submission Name: Musing IIIdots
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    Author: Caleb1741
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    dotsMusing IIIdots
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    In innocence contentment resides,
    For out of scarred and troubled hearts
    Do troubled emotions and acts stem.
    Through faith alone can innocence be regained.
    And thus peace.
    Let love follow.




    Submitted on 2011-12-14 15:54:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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