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    dots Submission Name: Pink Ribbon Duskdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 738
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    Bytes: 443



    Description:
       A beautiful dusk in Cameron Park, CA


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    dotsPink Ribbon Duskdots
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    Dusk
    Dresses the Horizon
    IN Pink GlowINg
    Ribbons

    All Nature is Silent
    For Cyclical Exchange ~*~

    EvenINg
    Adorns the Sky
    Cloak Technicolor
    Dream

    All Nature is Silent
    Cyclical Exchange

    Day hands over
    2 Night...

    On the opposite
    Side of the world
    Night hands
    the reigns
    2 Day ~*~




    Submitted on 2011-12-14 20:22:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Tiffany, you remind me of many wonderful sunsets I've had and of those I've missed. I catch one now and then here in Arizona when I'm not too busy to look up. You make me yearn for the pleasure of not being so absorbed by my obligations and duties to other people and things that I can enjoy more sunsets and sunrises and everything in between. Thanks for the moment. - Jim
    | Posted on 2011-12-18 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, yes, now this is a prime example of your poetry. You have such a unique style, melding nature and spirituality with simple, playful language. It's like finger painting with words...yes, that's exactly what it is like.

    I like how the personification of day and night as a dual personage, sort of a yin/yang thing. Day hands to night hands to day hands to night...

    Well done, Tiffany!

    -Sorrow
    | Posted on 2011-12-14 00:00:00 | by SorrowWing | [ Reply to This ]


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