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    dots Submission Name: Ransom Notesdots
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    Author: agrievingfille
    Elite Ratio:    1.1 - 1/5/18
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsRansom Notesdots
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    A retaliation has occurred,
    Twice already is too absurd
    Throw the ball back-hand,
    Do you really know this game like the back of your hand?

    Swish and flicker,
    This light has more of a tinker,
    Bell, like the belle of the ball,
    she was a beauty, yes I do recall
    I wasnt in a drunken state,
    Stating facts,
    Turning fact to fiction
    The friction between our fingertips,
    Is a science, none the less,
    Nothing more I can say,
    But I could replay
    a heartbeat - so I could live a little longer,
    maybe linger, by a thread that is tied to my fingers'
    like a forget me knot .....
    Well then, forget me not.




    Submitted on 2011-12-15 18:30:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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