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    dots Submission Name: politicsdots
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    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    22/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 581/277/103
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 524
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    Description:
       this is still pretty fresh i just need it out so i can refine it


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    dotspoliticsdots
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    Iíve got these dead limbs tangled up
    Mangled and twisted
    Suffocating myself with unanswerable questions
    Details, drowning in the fucking details, the whole project makes me sick
    I donít wanna talk to you about it
    I donít wanna hear you tell me Iím crazy Ď
    Just clinical and fucked up
    Iím so sick of hearing how Iím wrong
    This frustration is pouring out of me
    A great blast of FUCK YOU
    But the politics have me tied up
    Have me strung up within an inch of my life
    And itís a short fall with a knot around my neck
    I donít wanna settle
    Iíve work to hard on who I am to let you mistake a back bone for anything else
    Iíll hang myself with my faults before I let you walk on me again




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