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    dots Submission Name: Ethereal Rebirthdots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 318
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 375



    Description:
       Lately words have been turning up, and I just need to put my moments of feelings into words, which this turned up lol

    Dec 18th


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    dotsEthereal Rebirthdots
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    Evening puts on its gown as though its shimmering stars and fallen moans grace the universal poles.

    Condescending glances and rapture creates many in fracture, thus leaping and for-longing its only desire.

    Finally reminiscing winds touch silently as the shy lust of fruitful waters end a sinking smile which readies to lift into its own sunrise.




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