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insomni


Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 139 /260 /173
Words: 26
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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insomni



The quiet growling of the night
from somewhere inside its bowels;
Time to admit I lost the fight
and throw down the towel.




Submitted on 2011-12-19 20:40:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i think you meant insomnia. this feels like the time of night when sleep seems hopeless and just trying to keep it together for the next day becomes the struggle.
| Posted on 2011-12-19 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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