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    dots Submission Name: insomnidots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    26/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 136/243/156
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsinsomnidots
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    The quiet growling of the night
    from somewhere inside its bowels;
    Time to admit I lost the fight
    and throw down the towel.




    Submitted on 2011-12-19 20:40:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think you meant insomnia. this feels like the time of night when sleep seems hopeless and just trying to keep it together for the next day becomes the struggle.
    | Posted on 2011-12-19 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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