Honor Guard by Blue Monk

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Author:	Blue Monk
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Words:	36

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Our flag is an awesome symbol.

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Common Spirits uncommon valor
chose to serve ideals utmost
fallen on grounds made hallow
by sacrificed blood worldwide
such chosen few abide forever
around old glory
when she flies
Guards of Honor
never die

Submitted on 2011-12-20 01:09:24 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Well said, Lloyd!
It's all too easy to disagree with the reasons we go to war, but we should always support those who are sent to fight. They are us
Freedom isn't free...
it just feels like it,
thanks to our troops, past and present.

Your muse seems to be active...I hope it lasts!

| Posted on 2011-12-20 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
  i hate wars...but appreciate the men and women who fight for our country, who give their lives in service.

a nice tribute this is.

jacob
| Posted on 2011-12-20 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful sentiments Lloyd . I'm sure the families of those men and women would appreciate .

Bruce
| Posted on 2011-12-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
  the soldiers could never be supported enough. for any country really. senseless as i think the blood shed is, I'm not the one taking the risk, and it's not like any one of us who take the benefit really understand all the variables. hopefully this is taken in by those that need it.
| Posted on 2011-12-20 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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