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    dots Submission Name: Raindots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    26/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 136/243/154
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRaindots
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    Calving and cowering
    after the endge
    the city's tears.

    Mundane and mellow
    rolling lihgts
    embittered.

    Calligraphy without the sky
    Uneasy
    The tinkering fable of my time
    Beliigerent.




    Submitted on 2011-12-20 03:33:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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